In the recent times, there has been change in the people’s attitude towards their job noted. Instead of single job, they are doing multiple and also change their working fields quickly. These essay will discuss about the merits and demerits of this behavior.
Discussing the perks, doing more than one job can give aid in earning more money. This is especially true for someone who belongs to poor or upper middle class family and also someone who is the only bread earning person of his family. For instance, generally people in Africa used to do these kind of work to reduce poverty. Moreover, if someone is getting better job opportunities in another company, they should not hesitate from changing their recent job. This is due to the other facilities offered by multinational companies apart from handsome salaries. Apparently, companies have started giving work permits to their employees in foreign countries, so that a person can settle down over there with their family and expect better growth of kids. This is why workers swiftly transfer their jobs in comparison from the past.
However, these kind of mindset has some drawbacks too. Doing multiple jobs will restrict a person to give optimum concentration to one single field. This can be the cause of losing job as well. Apart from that there might be some issues like poor mental health and depression due to lack of enough rest. Furthermore, frequent alteration in companies require a lot of settlement for any individual. Every time they have to start from ground zero to get accustom to new environment which can be frustrating at some times. These is why a person should be cautious before starting new job.
To conclude, due to fancy payments and tempting job offers people want to change their companies as soon as possible. Still poor attention and mental problems pauses great risks for any individual.
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Suggestion: Still,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99681528662 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48994285242 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.908627425 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5789473684 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249257461103 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794243523373 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554070705752 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159703797584 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637512335438 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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