Recently, shopping has become an integral aspect of everyone’s lives. Whether it is require or not, people will enjoy it thoroughly and sometimes land themselves in bankrupt conditions. This essay will discuss causes behind this attitude and offer few measures.
Firstly, some people would love to showoff their social status which is common among celebrities and high society families. Internal satisfaction can be achieved by showcasing their luxurious and expensive purchases. Secondly, if they see some sort of ongoing sale or discount offers, then they get tempted and buy unnecessary items. Moreover, due to advent of online shopping, loans and EMI options the scenario has become worse.
However, there are few measures that can be taken to neglect this kind of behavior. Making a budget and sticking adherent to it. Although it may sound difficult but once gets into practice it becomes easier. Apart from that, going for shopping during sale or discounted season should be avoided as much as possible. Also implication of strict punishments rules must be enforced by government.
To conclude, shopping can be fun when it comes to buying necessary things. Otherwise, it can lead people to get in trouble. Making list of things require and having good self control can be two essential key factors to avoid people getting in kind of trouble.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...pect of everyone’s lives. Whether it is require or not, people will enjoy it thoroughly...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... should be avoided as much as possible. Also implication of strict punishments rules...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...void people getting in kind of trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23853211009 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64111853429 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720183486239 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6069435028 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304628662654 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853374231127 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699212566961 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161563897786 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073243178041 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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