These days we face the huge number of business advertisements on TV. It is believed that these advertisements have some bad effects on families, discuss it.
In the recent century people face a different market in which they can find a vast variety of products that are offered in multi-story shopping centers, web sites, …. A big number of these products are advertising daily in television or on buses, billboards and etc. The various numbers of these products makes it complicated for people to choose among them and they are mostly confused how to opt what they need. And sometimes this confusion leads to wasting money and choosing inappropriate goods which are discussed below.
The most important effect of advertising on people is tempting them to buy something that they really do not need. This way companies targeting the families’ budget and make them interested in buying unnecessary goods. It is kind of wasting money for families and can have bad effects in long time.
Another impact of publicity is on children’s health. Children are usually influenced by musical ads and colorful pictures of the products. These fake colors and sounds attract children to try them, while they are not healthy and beneficial for them. In long time, using these types of goods can be a treat for the whole society and may affect the next generation’s health.
In conclusion, the big number of publicity can have some disadvantages on families. Although the ads increase the number of sales of the products and introduce the new goods to the customers, they can affect children’s health and lower the families' budget as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...y in television or on buses, billboards and etc. The various numbers of these products m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09349593496 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87735109361 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7566348866 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172423612165 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641788468844 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061432701685 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999090432372 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284101240236 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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