Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

Essay topics:

Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

It is argued that tobacco should be prohibited since it is kind of addictive drug. This essay agrees with that statement because smoking causes a very high level of addiction, and is one of the biggest threats regarding public health.

The dependence effect of drugs is a fact. People suffering from drug addiction cannot easily give up it because drugs contain different types of ingredients that cause a physical desire. It is widely acknowledged that smoking has similar substances like other kind of drugs despite the process for smoking addiction takes a long way. Furthermore, easy access to tobacco should be deliberated in terms of a prospective rise in the addiction. For example, drugs such as heroin, ecstasy are provided by smugglers while cigarettes can easily be bought from the supermarket.

Even though a widespread opinion shared by numerous people on the damage of drug addiction on public health more than tobacco, the vast majority of experiments demonstrate that smoking is not less harmful than any other kind of drugs. The fundamental deceptive characteristic of smoking is that its effects are only observed in the long-term when compared to other drugs such as heroin, ecstasy. According to research conducted by the University of Exeter, using tobacco causes lung cancer 65% more than the people who have never smoked in their lives.

To conclude, smoking should be banned, owing to its additive features and detrimental effects on human health in the long-term. It is likely to claim that there is no considerable difference between tobacco and other types of drugs while the outcomes of smoking are not observable in the short-term.

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2019-12-12 berfincakin 78 view
2018-09-27 Syed Farooq Shah 78 view

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, while, for example, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20740740741 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77331987968 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7927092693 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231738137592 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872332649574 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403775977809 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140628951916 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398230908841 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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