Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara
desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and dis advantages for tourists who visit such places?
World is vast and is filled with beautiful scenarios in countless locations around. Humans like
to visit such places, which has its own benefits and disadvantages. Few of those points are
highlighted below.
Advantages of these visit are that they get to see the beauty of nature in its natural
environment. They come across people of various cast and culture hereby widening their perception
of people as such. They would appreciate the resources available to them when they experience the
importance of such resource like water in desert. Climate is essential for survival which can be
experienced in some of the coldest parts of the globe, along with the magnificent creatures which
lives there. During my visit to Egypt I had experienced the importance of humans and resources
such as food and water. Such experiences various with people to people.
Disadvantages of such places are that people could be allergic with food and could be life
threatening. Certain experience in wild such as close encounter with animals could be dangerous for
heart patients. Numerous germs spread through water, though bottled water is available around the
globe it could be too late when its harmful nature could be found out. For Instance, a friend of mine
was affected with food poisoning when he consumed a particular type of meat in Egypt. Such
disadvantages vary with person to person.
Each location has benefit and disadvantage but people should choose wisely the location
they travel to not only based on their desire but also on their limitations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26771653543 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69576965528 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.804408914 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145575612971 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556004061966 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462447675298 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489834481333 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475793318191 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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