Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population's sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits.Discuss both the views and your opinion.
One of the most common problem in the world is lavish consumption of sugar by the people.However there are ample number of diseases which is caused due to the sugar and the government have also taken various precautionary measures to eradicate this issue, but its purely based on the humans mind set.
Countries like and India, Pakistan and Italy is the most renowned country for sugar consumption,where they utilise sugar and more sweetening items to prepare dishes like cakes, desearts,pies, sweets, muffins and lots more. These countries use sugar and sugar partials for perparing thier favorite dishes during the festivals and occasions. The government had proven that 60% of the people in these countries spend in sugar bases products.This clearly indicates that its human nature and habitual related practice,moreover it plays a vital role in people health and and health related issue. As people utilize more amount of sugar in date to date basis its their responsibility to make sure that they also take care of their health and fitness, excessive sugar consumption causes various deseases like wheezing, obesity, hairfall,ageing,cancer,diabetes etc.
Meanwhile as its a clear indication that more intake of sugar will lead to unpredictable health issue, the governing parties have created various awareness and precautionary measure to eradicate and to avoid the deaseses caused due to sugar.Government had published a report based on the survey used to identify the peoples issuse and found that 40% of the population in the above mentioned countries are affected by sugar related desease.
In conclusion, its each and everyone's responsibility to make sure that they follow good habits and good practises to keep themself away from any deasese, excessive consumption of any food will end up with some problem, So its better to follow the awareness created by the govenment to life a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30363036304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28090321978 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6558867141 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.571428571 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2857142857 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308322458498 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15372592915 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629965127671 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174040332533 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928552138179 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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