Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In the present era, individuals devise to visit places such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic, which possess arduous circumstances. This essay shall elucidate fundamental merits and demerits associated with travelling to such onerous areas of the world.
To begin with, complacency is the key factor that fosters people to explore laborious places. Visiting common tourist attractions is usual for individuals but some may have the urge to travel isolated places on the earth. Such places give an immense feel of reaching the distinctive sections of the planet and enable people to experience survival in an unpredictable condition. Moreover, tourists disseminate fascinating information about such menacing places to others, which might be useful for public. For instance, many people explore perilous locations and gain knowledge about them, which gives them happiness and satisfaction that they have been to the rarest places of the world.
In contrary, one could encounter a life-threatning situation while sojourning such vicious places. The precise forecasting of weather conditions is keenly challenging at some places; thus, an individual could face severe consequences such as extremely freezing climate or a natural disaster. Consequently, tourists could get troubled by various dangerous situations and lose their precious lives. To illustrate, a group of several juveniles visited the Antarctic in 2015 and faced heavy snowfall, leaving them stranded for few weeks, which led to demise of few visitors due to inadequate essential food.
In conclusion, many individuals always have the desire to reach every corner of the planet that are seldomly thought by others. However, visiting places where the probablity of safe environment is less, demonstrates various advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70110701107 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99759120444 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4163508685 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285870720942 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931494452522 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722806708592 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158223386653 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048427296474 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.