Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, a growing number of travellers like to see places, where circumstances are extreme, such as the Sahara desert, or the Antarctic. Some of the advantages are, it provides a lifetime experience and teaches us to survive in harsh situations, whereas, the disadvantage includes adverse effects on health due to lack of readily available resources.
On the one hand, an increasing number of tourists are enjoying going to places, where less crowd or people movements occur, and these extreme places are providing this great opportunity. People like to see nature, which is yet untouched or unaltered by humans. For example, to understand nature at its best these places are preferred to carry out some scientific research as well.
In addition, visiting such places are good for a lifetime experience. We take birth once, and therefore, we should utilise our existence in capturing some beautiful and mesmerizing memories. It also adds value to our knowledge, which later on can be passed on to our children, or grandchildren. Not to forget that it teaches us to survive in hard situations.
On the other hand, roaming to such places may fall in a category of bad experiences due to the lack of readily available resources, such as drinking water, transportation, food, pleasant climate, and medication. It can also affect our health if we go without preparation for the necessities for our survival. For instance, As per an article published in the New York Times, it was revealed that around 2% of tourists have lost their lives since 2010, while in Antarctica due to extreme cold climate.
To conclude, as every coin have two sides; visiting Such unfavourable places have also some advantages and shortcomings. Advantages are, a perfect lifetime experience, and to carry some researches on nature, whereas, disadvantages are adverse effect on the health of tourists, and lack of readily available resources.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...as the Sahara desert, or the Antarctic. Some of the advantages are, it provides a lifetime ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21612903226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00140272444 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9941617602 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20506148257 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071033337891 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727551432117 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108882734191 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182048468181 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...as the Sahara desert, or the Antarctic. Some of the advantages are, it provides a lifetime ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21612903226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00140272444 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9941617602 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20506148257 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071033337891 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727551432117 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108882734191 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182048468181 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.