Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Travelling to explore different places is one of the growing hobby of people. Certain travellers are willing to go to places where there are extreme weather conditions. It can be a fascinating journey for people who wants to test their ability to accomplish things. However, it can be an extremely dangerous trip that can get them into trouble.
On the one hand, human beings have the propensity to carry out activities that are thrilling. It can be beneficial as these activities give us the pleasure of accomplishing things and helps us understand our potential. To elucidate, a famous novelist, Ripin Kaur visited the Sahara desert in 2017 to test his ability to achieve his impossible goals. He has written a book about his journey which indicates that this journey helped him in ameliorating his physical strength and confidence.
On the other hand, extreme climate can be intimidating because of the threats it poses. People who are new in visiting these places will not be able to cope up with the situations as it can be arduous. Due to the hot weather in deserts, people can get thirsty, famished and even get lost. Besides, cold weather can cause alarming impact like freezing the blood, numbing the body and pneumonia. For example, Fara Fowler, a well-known YouTube star who records videos of the places he visits, died during his visit to Antartica because of the lower temperature.
In conclusion, visiting places with strenuous conditions can be enthralling and helps us in understanding our potential. Nevertheless, it can cause serious problems which may result in loss of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04150943396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83108413507 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8699729705 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128592228715 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464329070028 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534977269477 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847766597276 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251488216279 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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