Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Comparing olden days, most of them are set to travel around the world, more often today. Modern technology and transportation paves way to this new trend, where people, visiting different places from an African desert to the snow mountains of the Himalayas have increased in number. Even though, travel poses a high risk on the lives of the travelers, it gives a long-lasting memory. However, the tourists experience a lot of advantages out of traveling.
Firstly, Many make it a hobby or a leisurely activity visiting new destinations in order to make memories with their family and friends in the form of photographs. Also, some travel professionals record stories to publish in television, websites, blogs, journals etc. Moreover, numerous automobile companies provide affordable interests on loans and insurance, thus most of them own a car and travel short distances. In addition to this, discounted rates are offered for air travel for long distance, likewise with the other means as well.
Let us look in the benefits, many tourists, are gaining a lot of information about different culture and standards of living. Quite a few are fascinated about a country and the lifestyles of the mankind by subsequently making a permanent move to those countries as immigrants. For example, Yesterday’s expeditions, new sea routes, cities formed, shows how travelers became famous personalities and are remembered even today. Every journey is a motivation, until the next one. Furthermore, they are encouraged and feel heroic after every travel for self and close ones. Another example, a travel journal kicked off, after an article with a video of a new adventure while skiing in a snowy mountain went viral on a social media.
In conclusion, many countries are seeing a sudden growth in the country’s tourism and development has raised rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun make seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many makes'.
Suggestion: Many makes
...advantages out of traveling. Firstly, Many make it a hobby or a leisurely activity visi...
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Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
...a snowy mountain went viral on a social media. In conclusion, many countries are s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01535407374 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659932659933 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5085175512 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.133333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246481264129 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746513644052 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737647743292 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12578624832 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735807841817 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.