Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Working for longer periods of time keeps people away from leisurely activities. I strongly agree to this, as it has adverse effects both physically and mentally resulting in serious illness.
Firstly, people employed in jobs using computers, report high eyesight problems, and open to risks namely obesity, cardiac diseases and psychological illness. While, the high-pressure duties keep the stress levels increased, many of them are already on medications in their mid-30’s and some even quit the job and find better assignments that suit their conditions. Furthermore, it is evident with the decreasing life span among stressed working community, showing how worse, the problem is.
Secondly, although, we live in a competitive world to secure our position, it is every individual’s responsibility to spend enough time on a fitness regime. After all, we live in a fast-moving world, we have no time to suffer ill-health, so practicing a sport is a good idea too. Even though, we are running behind work all day, it is essential to cook healthy meals. Nevertheless, some feel cooking a relief too, between their busy day. Therefore, it is high time we understand the importance of clean eating and exercise.
Finally, stress busters namely, travel, cinema or shopping with family and friends is lately forgotten. For example, news relating to employees death at workplace, due to cardiac arrest, shook the the working professionals recently. In addition, it is good to have games and sports every now and then, to push employees take some time for themselves even during the office hours or outside this time.
In conclusion, without any hindrance to fun time, slogging hours have to be managed by the working population, as the consequences are unimaginable loss to humanity. Health is wealth, so it is the key for a happy living.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-24 | Wajeeha Umer | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-11 | TheWeirdPotato | 67 | view |
| 2019-12-02 | angchams | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | TDuyen | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | Sohaibkq | 61 | view |
- Essay topics: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details 70
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:say how you feel about his performancegive details of your musical activitiesexplain how you would lik 89
- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...workplace, due to cardiac arrest, shook the the working professionals recently. In addi...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...workplace, due to cardiac arrest, shook the the working professionals recently. In addi...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...on, it is good to have games and sports every now and then, to push employees take some time for t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98935293949 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670033670034 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4543676591 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170192464555 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540262892213 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595282238858 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996562253208 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527653526654 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.