Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travelers?
Nowadays, world turns to a global village and people access to various sources to obtain information about different nations all over the globe. This world class information gives the residents of urban and rural areas the chance to travel more than ever before. There are some crucial reasons for this trend and it can benefit globetrotters by broadening their mind and changing their attitude toward life.
There are some significant reasons why people are more interested in travelling than before. Firstly, the means of transportation has changed for the better and human could access great achievement in aviation, navy and motor vehicle industry that provide the most convenient form of travelling for individuals. Secondly, tourists has turned into an industry during the last decades and consequently, the investors and government make impressive advertisements for it which would be beneficial for them and bring income for the hosted countries, local people and the government authorities. Finally, travelling and visiting new places seems appealing to those groups of fellows who are fund of travelling. A salient example of this is the Malaysia that could boost the number of visitors to his country up to 70% in 2013 just by vast advertising.
On the other hand, there are some advantages of travelling for travelers. It is believed globally that travelling broaden the mind since travelers can gain valuable experiences in their trips such as visiting new people, historical places and the like. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that more than 40% of pupils in USA preferred to travel for one year after their graduation to get more experience and then they start seeking for a job. Furthermore, travelling give them the chance to get familiar to different customs, cultures and traditions by studying the ethnic minorities, the local people and the history of the hosted countries. Moreover, travelling is an amazing means of relaxation that is much more popular among people than it used to be in the past.
In conclusion, travelling has some benefits not only for the travelers but also for the hosted countries. Although travelers may have some detrimental effects on the natural habitat, they bring income for the local people and make some job opportunities for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22105263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81121123135 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560526315789 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8397357098 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.266666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461543182936 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171917052489 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109117162466 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290339148836 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348879886888 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.