In the past, people spent all their lives at the same place and the price of the tour was very expensive. Nowadays, with technological advancement, cheaper flights, traveling is more popular than before. This essay will discuss why people are traveling more than ever and the benefits of traveling.
Our world seems like a scary place, but it is so beautiful. It has a lot of beautiful scenery where we cannot feel if we do not see it. Therefore, traveling is a way to enjoy the imposing scene of the world. Some people like coming to another place to enjoy the great landscape. With our, every traveling is like a journey to discover the world and become a memory to remember when we are aged. Besides that, with technological development, cheaper flights, we can easily travel to anywhere. Why we need just is a pack back, clothes, money and a passport. A lot of tour agent make the price become more inexpensive than before which is suitable for someone who does not have much money
Traveling brings a lot of advantages to travelers. It is as a means of entertainment after a hard day's working, people tend to reduce the stress by traveling to avoid the hustle and bustle city. After every journey, they can have a lot of knowledge. They can know another place, meet some new friends, take a ton of photos, know about the culture of another country, try eating different foods. Traveling is becoming a hobby for many people in the world.
In conclusion, we cannot deny the benefits of traveling and the reason why traveling is more popular than ever. I believe that traveling will be more popular and developed in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tour seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of tours'.
Suggestion: A lot of tours
...ck back, clothes, money and a passport. A lot of tour agent make the price become more inexpe...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for someone who does not have much money Traveling brings a lot of advantages to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59531830097 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6554968253 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0588235294 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417009621692 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141925373483 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146700504725 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291638078841 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111251384801 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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