TODAY ONLINE SHOP IS INCREDIBLY POPULAR
DO YOU THINK IT IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?
It is becoming more well-known when the online shopping companies account for the large amount of market consumption now. This essay will outline some benefits and drawbacks that affect the client.
Obviously,shopping through the Internet gives customers more opportunities to choose stylish and advantageous products. Many apps or websites associated with retail sales have been organized to enhance the diversity of goods and convenience when interacting with clients such as Taobao,Amazon,Tiki,...People,therefore, are much easier to figure out what they are keen on and sellers also can find potential customers faster than in the previous days.Furthermore, shopping online is an exceedingly worthwhile way for someone being too lazy to go to shopping malls.This is because shippers will transfer their goods from the shops to their house and take money depending on the distance,which also creates incomes for some people.
Nevertheless, people can be deceived or stolen information while joining in shopping online.Since customers just check the product through advertisements and comments ,it is really difficult to appreciate the quality of goods.When buying a bright blue dress online,for instance,you can receive a dark blue dress with cotton fabric from the shop.Moreover,thefts are easy to hack online apps to steal client’s information for their own bad aims.Naturally,the crimes prefer to take phone numbers ,names and addresses for earning money from customer’s cards or selling their goods. if they know your information,they will come to your home and give you a fake good,for example.
In conclusion,taking part in online shopping has a lot of conveniences , benefits and even smoothness for both clients and retail. However,people should utilise the technology smartly and carefully if they don’t want to have any problem with their goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69892473118 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88481475933 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659498207885 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.600592058 49.4020404114 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.75 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.625 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106699407385 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486933411164 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325803636036 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691835866173 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00677157869703 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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