Today’s society provides people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today’s lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your viewpoint of the situation?
These days, people have more options to remain healthy by adopting special diet programs and exercises. However, a major section of society believes that inappropriate snack intake and way of living are two prominent aspects that need to be considered first. I also agree that poor meal consumption and devoting time to technology are two primary factors that are responsible for health issues.
Firstly, junk meal is the main culprit of health. That is to say, people nowadays prefer to eat ready-made cuisine due to its mouth-watering flavors, which have generally low nutrition values and casts an adverse effect on the holistic growth of the body, therefore people may fall prey to various health issues such as obesity and other ailments. A recent study conducted has shown that 55% of individuals who suffer from overweight utilize a substantial amount of fast food.
Secondly, the trend of spending sizeable time on electronic gadgets is liable for gaining fat. In other words, masses spend a massive amount of time on these devices as these provide a diverse means of entertainment, which do not only develop sedentary lifestyles but eventually deprive them of sports. An article published in a local newspaper concluded that around 45% of humans are fat because of a lack of physical movements in their daily routine.
On balance, it is undeniable that individuals have more choices to choose from to become hale and hearty, but I believe that multitudes should pay attention to their eating habits and style of their living to lose weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13147410359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69959641951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689243027888 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8780870096 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164292952829 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508891456041 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412974936869 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846432981003 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444326995277 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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