In today’s time, the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Other prefers classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
By emerging technology, particularly the internet, education mode has been changed. Online courses are designed to promote education among more people. Some people argue that online courses are more appealing because they give them more freedom to study, while others believe that traditional system, classroom education, have more benefits for educators such as group work, presentation skills. In my opinion, studying on campus is still more beneficial because it enhances different skills.
Online courses are compelling among some people due to some reason. First, it allows people to choose wherever they want to learn, and they don’t force them to put a specific time to go to some particular places. This method is more in favor of people who have a job, and they don’t want to take off from their workplaces. For instance, if one employee needs to improve their computer skills, specifically excel, it only needs to register in an online course, and they quickly access the information whenever they want.
However, an online course is a good option for busy people; the on-campus study has a better solution for a younger student in any respect. The educator will have a chance to enhance their skills through different tasks while they are studying. In many courses, the student needs to work together to complete the assignment, and eventually, they need to present their result in the classroom. If this frequently occurs during education, it certainly gives them more confidence, and consequently, students learn presentation skills, group working, and time management. In one study state that seventy percent of students who choose to study on campus attain more social skills in compare with another mode of education.
In sum, I believe that classroom education is more effective because young students learn social skills besides knowledge learning. While for busy people who want to boost their knowledge at any time, online courses are a good option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32278481013 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64708900407 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0477771349 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222326248594 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812278791709 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410104594737 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138680924306 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330100572309 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.