In this modern world, technology plays a crucial role to provide education via different sorts of modes. Although nowadays computer technology is highly beneficial for studying from home. While others prefer in-person education. In this essay, I will discuss why both ways are useful and how online study provides great assistance in order to save time.
To begin with, traditional classroom learning helps to make great communication connections between pupil and tutor. Before Covid students need to attend school. As a result, they made direct connections with an instructor by asking direct questions and clearing their doubts if any. Even though it is also accessible during online learning still, students feel this is the easy and comfortable way that is addressed in this paragraph.
On other hand, people express their views on why E-learning has a plethora of merits and time-saving processes for instance. Though online education mentors balanced their personal and school life. They do not need to waste time to reach their destination to get an education. While staying home they can submit their assignments and complete their courses with the help of the guidance of their instructors.
To conclude, no doubt in class education helps to make a good bond between students and teachers however, i believe online learning is highly beneficial for making a balance between the personal and school life of students by saving time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to still
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67790793835 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5011804294 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230231782196 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763291429059 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482457949 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130627244725 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592344019883 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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