In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
There is no shortage of debate whether it is more important to be able to take risks and do your job quickly or to check that everything is correct and be slow. In my opinion, it is more advantageous to be able to work quickly and be able to take risks. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, By being quick you will surely make mistakes, but this is not a negative point. One will start to learn from the mistakes they have made. By taking risks, step by step you will make less mistakes and get better at the job you are doing. My own experience is a compelling example of this. As I graduated from university, I started working at a big architecture company. This was a risk for me as I had little experience in my career. I was asked to do a lot of work in a very little time and I made mistakes. But slowly I started to learn to do my job better at the little time that was given to me. This made me a better architect and now I enjoy a successful career. This is why I believe it is better to do your job fast and learn from the mistakes you will make.
Secondly, In the world we are living, you cannot always be slow to make sure you have made no mistakes. You need to work real hard and real fast to be able to compete with others. Making mistakes is accepted to some levels these days. and every work is checked along the way instead of being checked completely and then put to use. as an example, I can mention my cousin. He worked as a software developer and he was forced to code a software in a little time, about a month, so he was able to compete with another software developer company that he was in rivalry. As a result, he had to release his software with a beta version - an unfinished version for testing - and fix the mistakes he made after the release. Accordingly, I think it is asked from us in todays world to be able to work fast and fix our mistakes later.
In conclusion, I think It is better to do work fast and risk making mistakes that to be slow and try to be always correct. This is because one will learn from the mistakes they might make and because they are needed to be fast in their work to be able to compete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun mistakes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...aking risks, step by step you will make less mistakes and get better at the job you ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... is accepted to some levels these days. and every work is checked along the way ins...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...checked completely and then put to use. as an example, I can mention my cousin. He...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, second, secondly, so, then, as for, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10368663594 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32140345963 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423963133641 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7628171649 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4347826087 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2693950131 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806153583493 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631657716025 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172528009474 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025078538127 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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