Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... is augmented day by day. It gives a lot of benefits individual and society, whic...
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Suggestion: that's
...private cars for going other places. In thats way, they give employment to those pers...
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
.... In thats way, they give employment to those person, who are unemployed and give the opport...
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Suggestion:
...and butter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the...
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...utter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the owne...
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...g some places, and the owner of convince bring good profits and its aftermath are...
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Suggestion: don't
...clusion, everyone has their own views I dont deny any of them. But, I cogitate, due ...
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...untry. Is the Tourister visit there, so the alter there the financial condition of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74534161491 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52299329337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5701037849 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0649445626528 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024682188936 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351328870982 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425812697809 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412175808003 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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