In the past, the male role of teachers was providing information for today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
In the bygone era, The most important role of mentor was provision Knowledge. Nowadays the various sources of information is available to learners, teachers have not contribution in recent lesson. I agree with the latest statement. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
In modernisation era, Technology plays an important role in their life. Specially the student is totally depend on the technology. Primarily, the students are collect the knowledge from Internet, they do not need the teachers, due to facilities of technology. Because, everyone has their own computers, mobiles and they will do home work of any stream in their home.they do not think the need of teacher guidence.
Further more, some people are very busy in their life. While some people are doing business and they think of doing studies but they do not have time for join coaching centres , institutes.but, they gain the knowledge from Internet. For example, Some think about future, It becomes effective ploy, but they do not have funds for Pay to coaching centres, but they are gain knowledge from Internet.
In conclusion, every people have their own views. I do not deny any of them. But, I cogitate if the person will do effort for any work, without any matters they definitely achieve their goals in their future
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,-tell 56
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,-tell 73
- You want to study a course in the local college You already Road chatter about the same to the principal of the college but you have not yet replied any reply to your letter Write a letter to the principal in your letter Detail of the course why should wa 72
- Tourism is an ever growing industry But the benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society 30
- Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. what extent do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70939526416 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6760937043 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173398887412 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639707925733 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658987679878 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119582933952 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084474974285 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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