Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.
In this modern world, traffic has become the major issue in many countries around the world. Let me illustrate the various factors relating to the root causes and precautions that has to be taken to retain the beauty of the nature.
Firstly, development in the various technologies specially in the transport motor cars with different brands, ford, WBM, taxis, buses likewise made people crazy about the driving as it has become passion for some of the individuals. On other other hand, people usually prefer to go outside with their convenient can be car, motor cycle as so on rather preferring walk, which is leading the major cause for the traffic jam and inturn polluting the nature and effecting the mankind with various hazardous diseases instances Asthama, Cancer and likewise. In the early era, people used to walk such a long distance and proper diet, while this is missing in the present world.
Furthermore, in India it is the similar situation what people are facing. People are adopting the technologies and wants to live their life with comforts. Because of this, man is not concentrating with the surroundings irrespective of the beautiful nature, which has to be preserved else will face a major issues in the future also. Due to traffic jam and high usage in the country, many of the people are facing with various diseases as mentioned above and creating the health concerns. Man should prefer walking at least to the less distance rather preferring the vehicles.
To summarise, it is good to have development in the innovations and technologies in different sectors and constant efforts, hardworking and intelligence has reached the moon as well. However, one should also consider the consequences of the innovations and take precautions accordingly. Things, which can be done easily at our end without any dependency, one should handle by themselves. There is universal quote - "Health is Wealth" next comes the rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he driving as it has become passion for some of the individuals. On other other hand, peopl...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
...passion for some of the individuals. On other other hand, people usually prefer to go outsi...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... will face a major issues in the future also. Due to traffic jam and high usage in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, well, while, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16981132075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80057509814 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.680408946 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905760011177 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354790533285 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797578917754 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687998417258 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757005537733 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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