It is argued that tertiary instituition should equally enroll number female and male students in all areas of academics. This essay disagrees completely that number of females to be enrolled should be equal to males. It will discuss drawbacks that women encounter as they go up the ladder of life.
Gender biase is the major effect on enrolment of female students at universities.There are some professions dominated by males you can not expect to see equal number of male and females except for few exceptional women. For instance, engineering is dominated by males as the nature of work sometimes require manual dextrity which sometimes we lack as females, so we tend to shun those type of courses.
Biologically, most females attain lower grades in high schools compared to their male counterparts, this leads to few women join challenging courses. For example in medicine and law minimum entry requirements for females is 14 points compared to men which is 15points , they do this to try gender balance which is not attainable as most females will have lower grades already.
Societal roles and expectation plays a huge role in unequality in enrolment of equal number of students both males and females. For example a married female is expected to play a role as a wife ,mother or daughter which is accompanied by household chores compared to a male counterpart who will be focusing on his studies only, therefore takingup up a challenging course will not be fruitful for a female hence they are encouraged to take less challenging courses.
Despite the mentioned challenges, some people agree that an equal number of students should be enrolled to promote gender equality. It is als believed hypothically that both men and women has equal strength, therefore they should have equal opportunities.
In my opinion, I disagree that there are some professions which are suitable for men since most women experience hormonal imbalances or pregancy which does not affect our male counterparts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...quality. It is als believed hypothically that both men and women has equal streng...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, except for, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15337423313 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90053706142 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9699177741 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265074170128 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115558471015 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817062583836 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145142907437 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694831355813 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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