Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?
It has been a highly debatable issue that whether equal budget should be provided in both physical activity book rooms. I completely agree with this statement as sports play an important role in the life along with the libraries. This essay will discuss why same provision should be given for both games and study centres.
Firstly, Playing games will make the student mind sharper and also allows them to concentrate more on the studies. Even though, Sports involve lots of time consuming, those activities makes them to focus on their topics more and keep them active in all ways. For example, a recent survey conducted by times of India concluded that people who participate in extracurricular activities are performing well in their academics than people who are not. To add a point to this, People playing games will be more healthy and fit.
Secondly, nowadays apart from the academic success most of the children are getting succeeded in extracurricular activities as well. This is why there is a necessity to allocate time and money to this segment because there is a possibility that youth should be encouraged in this. For example, Most of the sports celebrities in todays world are poor in their academics, but they have excelled in their career. This also enhances the fame and name of the university.
Finally, It is very much essential to allocate an equal amount of funds for both physical activities and study centres as this will benefit the individual, University and also to the nation.
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree 61
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree 61
- Many famous sports players advertise sports products Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00395256917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64807385584 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.790301623 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220416378462 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683220260873 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472731103827 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127500253365 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292199776593 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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