Usage of plastic is harm to environment. Do you agree or disagree?
Plastic is one of the important material used across the world. Though it makes human life simple, it has lot of side effects to environment. Let's see how plastic ruins human life and environment in the below sections.
Plastic material are widely used in shopping malls,groceries shop.
These places have lot of people coming on daily basis. Usage of plastic should be limited in these areas mainly.
Most of the people prefer plastic bags rather than paper bags or jute bags due to which shop keepers tend to use more plastic.
These carry bags are not decompossed properly, which leads to worst pollution in most of the areas.
When the usage of plastic was reviewed all over the world, few countries were found using more than the prescribed usage.
This results helped the goverment to take strict actions. In recent studies, ocean is found to be polluted more.
Fish and other sea living organism are facing serious illness due to this. Thus it is high time for all of us to realize and eradicate the use of it.
Plastic are advantageous to humans in one way if it is used appropriately. If the microns levels are controlled properly then there will not be any harm to environment. Virgin plastics are used widely in many places which are considered to be safe.
To summarize, each individual should realize that plastic is having adverse effect on environment. People should try to carry jute bags with them, by this way the usage of plastics can be reduced. Shopping malls should use paper bags/jute bags in order to make environment free from plastic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...has lot of side effects to environment. Lets see how plastic ruins human life and en...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , groceries
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
...e not decompossed properly, which leads to worst pollution in most of the areas. When...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...are facing serious illness due to this. Thus it is high time for all of us to realiz...
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Line 12, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in one way if it is used appropriately. If the microns levels are controlled prope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86617100372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50182835535 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7188005942 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8947368421 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 7.06120827912 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177658690034 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581902995127 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467111776625 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707754410227 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520648183297 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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