People said that daily utilizing a computer tend to produce more negative impact than positive to youngsters. I strongly agree with this notion and will portray a few disadvantages of this thought, followed by a logical conclusion.
Firstly, perhaps the most relevant reason for this is children will become less sociable. Computer nowadays is more advance where you can do almost everything while you are just seated on your comfortable chair. For example, children who frequently uses computer daily tend to watch online streaming video or play games rather than physically playing outside and interacting with real playmates. Secondly, extensive usage of computer will result in poor health. Computer screen could hurt children's eye as well as their brain if overuse. For example, most kids this days spend all of their time playing computer games, even skipping food just to retain their level or score ingame. This behavior will deteriorate their health, strain their eyes and eventually damage their brain.
While people mostly negates this trend, some of them also take this positively. The reason behind this thought most probably was children would gain more knowledge by using a computer. For instance, before student's needed to go to the library and keenly search for a book to answer their assignments or just to read new kinds of stuff. Today, with the help of the computer, they will only search in the internet and they will be bombarded with millions of information. Though it is convenient, this most likely to promote health issues if abused.
To conclude, while computer utilization is somehow beneficial for students to gain more knowledge. But, I do believe that it outweighs the positiveness it possesses since it will produce health and make young-ones less sociable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rain if overuse. For example, most kids this days spend all of their time playing co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22837370242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59884858362 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.808886705 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199985965167 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680905389789 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061455788339 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124090701825 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391828647925 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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