We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the use of computers and its pros and cons to the society. While some people argue that the disadvantages of the use of computers overweigh the advantages, on my point of view I disagree with this statement. In this essay, I shall discuss on factors to strengthen my argument while analyzing both sides of it to greater extent.
First and foremost, society can experience myriad of benefits from computers, such as increase of security, confidentiality, intergrity and encapsulation. For instance, businesses can use computers for investor reporting and statistical tools can be used for data analysis as well. Similarly, hospitals use computers for administration purposes and they record history of patients in order to facilitate the diagnosis process. Apart from that, computers are heavily used in crime detection process, where they can use to store data about criminals and crimes as well. CCTV technology has made a tremendous contribution in crime investigation because they provides evidences on crimes.
In addition, computers have made lives easier since, it reduces human involvement to greater extent in most of the instances. In some occassions, employers allow employees to work from home enabling them to save money on transportation together with their valuable time. This move has reduce the importance office space requirement, while realizing the concept of virtual workplace.
In conclusion, the security engineers have to ensure the internet security since, some businesses highly depend on sensitive data. Moreover, hackers can hack the systems and get the sensitive information of a particular organization and hand over them to their competitors to get them away from the market place. Finally, governments, bear the responsibility of providing sufficient digital infrastructure to their citizens, while empowering their workforce on the knowledge of information technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
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Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17492082141 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9828318913 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184760877191 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582372061508 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546548624313 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088420459494 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777428886889 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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