Wealth does not necessarilty guarantee happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement ??
some people argue that money can buy happiness. Despite the luxuries and wealthy people are not always carefree .I, however, believe two main areas where even money cannot help to curb the problem.
Firstly, it is been said “health is wealth”, meaning an individual owning huge property and plethora luxuries but he is not blessed with health or suffering from some disease then money benefits no one. While I concede that wealth can help anybody to take better treatment and hospitality, the problem is that certain diseases even do not have the cure and some patients may have exceptional severe sickness such as AIDS, cancer at last stage and so on. A good illustration of this is Steve Jobs, owner of Apple Inc. , died at 56 due to pancreatic cancer in spite of having the net worth of $10.2 billion. Thus, it is clear money cannot always heal illness.
Secondly, talent is another area of concern. Many supporters of bribery and black money claim that they can take fake certificates and degrees. however, I would argue that such educational qualification is useless if people do not have depth knowledge or to apply them in the real world. In fact, it is widely noticed people become doctor or lawyer with bribery and they deteriorate life of other citizens as they do not have desire mastery. To exemplify, In Delhi, 30% of cases of serious patients were reported due to the fallacious treatment done by doctors.
In short, not only wealth cannot restore serious disease, but also it cannot impart skills to become a successful person. Therefore, although I acknowledge that money makes life comfortable, I disagree that it can assure people to live joyously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in fact, in short, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96113074205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61253368884 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.960900223 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791072734448 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240171241825 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248991155131 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427791954119 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188663504143 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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