Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the developed nations welcome displaced people from other countries, and aid them with eatables and shelter. This essay completely agrees with this idea because this gesture would portray the image of a peace-loving country to the world, and the host country could increase its economy through these refugees.
The primary reason for accepting refugees by the rich nations is to draw a better image to the world because of war these refugees become homeless. Moreover, they leave their houses and have nothing to eat so by giving them all the basic necessities, the accepting country leaves a message to the world that we are peace-loving and not pro-war. For example, in the Syrian Civil War, 2017 3.6 million refugees migrated and accepted by the Turkish government and upon this gesture, the United Nations stated that Turkey is one of the top five nations who want peace on earth.
Secondly, refugees are helpful in improving the countries’ economy because the host country can use them as a skilled worker by giving them jobs. Some of the migrants would be skilled professionals and their skills can be used by the host country, to improve their rapidly growing economy, in particular, areas where there is a shortage of labour. In return, they will get a handsome amount and pay tax to the government and results in a wealthier nation. For example, Canada aimed to invite more than 1 million refugees from different countries due to the shortage of labour and hence it will boost their economy.
To conclude, some people believe that rich nations should receive more refugees because it begets benefits to the recipient countries in terms of economy and depicts a peaceful image in front of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...othing to eat so by giving them all the basic necessities, the accepting country leaves a message...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s a skilled worker by giving them jobs. Some of the migrants would be skilled professionals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98625429553 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5463987089 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5121313711 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166870236589 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686357614265 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414850124073 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102569660882 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00744532801153 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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