Wealthy countries should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that rich countries should provide help to developing or underdeveloped countries suffering from natural calamities. This essay will agree with this statement because, they have enough resources and materials to support people in need and also they should do it encourage humanity amongst people against all odds such as caste, creed, religion, and nation.
Developed countries must ensure to lend a helping hand to the unhealthy countries to get them out of the life-threatening natural incidents such as tsunami, earthquake, and wars. Moreover, these unstoppable disasters cause people to lose their basic necessities in life like food, clothing, and shelter. Recent research found that, during the war in Syria, many developed countries came together to support the unprivileged people by welcoming to their own country as refugees. In addition, they were provided safety and confidence to rebuild their life once again.
Humanity and kindness can never be out of fashion. By giving guidance and assistance to poor citizens, wealthy nations will be able to show the level of generosity and also empower those who do not step forward to help people. Such news will spread worldwide through which men and women including the growing teenagers will learn the importance of human kindness. A study in 1990 concluded that almost 60% of people in the US were motivated y humans who were kind enough to help the needy in difficult times.
In conclusion, wealthier countries should help the poorer countries with support financially and emotionally to reconstruct their broken life during unexpected circumstances and encourage humanity amongst people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...ople in need and also they should do it encourage humanity amongst people against all odd...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...le disasters cause people to lose their basic necessities in life like food, clothing, and shelte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44615384615 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81825200766 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3633950115 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239392825883 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840455288846 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089262604693 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154931167804 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748497658572 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.