In western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?
At present, families, who decide not to reproduce, is growing in quantity. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this sort of family.
Let us start with the positive sides of having no descendants. The first advantage is that families can concentrate fully on building a career. Couples can both work harder and achieve more career goals. For instance, in the USA, many married women choose to gain work experience and high salary instead of sitting at home with a child. Another benefit is that families can easily relocate. The absence children in the marriage enables the family members to travel around the world easily and freely. The final advantage is that they can enjoy the life with no parental responsibility. Having no children means for couples to care for solely themselves, which allows them to do what they desire.
Despite the above mentioned merits, it also has many demerits. First of all, aging often causes fertile problems. Many women will find it difficult to get pregnant, when her husband and she decide to have children at a later age. For example, in Kazakstan, many married females resort to artificial fertilization, since they have lost a chance to carry the baby in their twenties. Secondly, some couples will have no one to rely, when they retire. Once they reach retirement, this type of family will live counting only on themselves. The last drawback is that they will never experience the happiness of parenting. The feeling of regret for not having offsprings will gradually grow over time.
In conclusion, marriages without having children have many advantageous and disadvantageous sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
... get pregnant, when her husband and she decide to have children at a later age. For ex...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08518518519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65870467755 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7744244774 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2631578947 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283822229398 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789802147179 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946264712119 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176592266155 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117421177866 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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