Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Two days ago, I read a newspaper article about how various nations tackle poverty. In the article, some social workers from Kazakhstan explain both why the number of poor people are growing in the country and how authorities may handle it. In this essay, I will analyze some of these reasons and suggest possible solutions.
Let us start with the reasons contributing to poverty. The first reason is that it is usually the result of unemployment. Many people lead an impoverished lifestyle, because they cannot find a job in a shrinking labor market for a long time. Another reason is that high prices for food frequently aggravates poverty. Most poor families, for example, generally experience a new decrease in the number of accessible goods, since their prices are growing too frequently. Therefore, after the analysis of these reasons, it is clear that Kazakhstan faces the issue of impoverishment.
However, numerous social workers claim that the country can tackle this problem by adopting the following steps. Firstly, they advise generating many employment opportunities. The way forward would be for the government to create plenty of available jobs for the jobless by opening both new plants and factories. Secondly, they recommend to make products affordable. To address the difficulty with expensive food, for instance, authorities should reduce the number of trailers, so that few companies add their margins to the final price. As a result, after the consideration of these solutions, it is obvious that it is probable to deal with poverty.
In conclusion, although there are many factors causing poverty in Kazakstan, I believe that officials can relieve the suffering of poor citizens, if they take the above mentioned actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to generate'.
Suggestion: to generate
...e following steps. Firstly, they advise generating many employment opportunities. The way ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3082437276 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85957269491 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3610248301 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249689773084 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626548587446 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494882242731 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138778234995 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261298687923 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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