What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television?
Nowadays, the number of children spending time in front of television is growing dramatically. Some sociologists claim that this trend has many negative effects, while some teachers state that it is beneficial for children. In this essay, I will consider both sides and try to draw some conclusion.
Let's start by looking at the benefits of children watching television. One of its main advantages is that they can have another source of knowledge about the world. In addition to school, children can get familiar with things, such as wildlife, engineering and fashion, while they are watching documentaries and various shows on TV. Another positive aspect of watching television is that it can be relaxing for pupils. School children often have problems with stress due to studying, but, for example, watching both cartoons and adventure films usually enables them to unwind and recharge their batteries quickly. After the analysis of these benefits, it is undoubtedly that children should be allowed to watch television.
Turning to the other side of the argument, some sociologists argue that watching television has plenty of drawbacks. First of all, it can cause eye impairment. In many cases, over-exposure to TV leads to problems with eyesight amongst children because they rarely move as well as blink their eyes for hours while watching television. Secondly, it can result in poor academic performance. Pupils, who are used to watching TV, have a tendency to ignore homework and play truant from school, since they find it more interesting than going to school. After the consideration of the disadvantages, it goes without saying that television is often disadvantageous for children.
All things considered, even though that some sociologists make a statement that watching television is detrimental for growing generation, personally, I believe that the above-mentioned advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46308724832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01935858795 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9748374184 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378490944879 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116076617285 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081363482536 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218558302695 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571875079925 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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