What problems will your country face in next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
India is a developing country and certainly it is facing many problems. Prime minister of India is working hard to overcome the problems. There are many problem which will come before India get fully developed.
Firstly, the main problem is polluted enviornment. Foregin companies are considering India as a big market to sell their product and because of that they are constructing their industries in India, Which is good for the growth of India. However, it is creating problem for the enviornment. Farmers are selling their agriculture land to the big companies as they offers a good amount. Companies cut down the trees to construct their industries. Their industries also disturb the air by the chemical gases. I believe, government can overcome this problem by allocating a outskirts land to these industries so that the chemical gasses can't enter in the cities. Some rules should be inplace so that if any industry throw their waste in the river then their license can get cancel.
Seondly, unemployment problem is getting bigger and bigger day by day for example every year more than 2 lakh students come out of college with the degree of MBA but Unfortunately, their is only 20% jobs available. Because of this students apply for migrating to another country. This is a good option for the students but it actually harming India as country is loosing the qualified people. Furthermore students also think that they would get high salary in another country as compare to India. I believe that this problem can be solved if government can increase the basic wages slot. In addition, if government can start building the material within India then it can help in increasing the jobs for the people. By selling the Indian made material people can earn profitable money same like working in another country.
In conculsion, their are many problem which will come in the next 10 years but India's govenment need to think about those from now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97859327217 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59963301601 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4439950731 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6842105263 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222044347261 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072799703766 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644614138124 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144493213463 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199661389401 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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