When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most of job-seeker based on the size of the salary offered to make decision of working for one company. Although I admit that money is key consideration when choosing a career, I believe that other factors are equally important.
It is undeniable that earning money is a vital part of our life. When people are living under considerable financial stress day by day, income is necessary in order to meet their basic needs such as food, healthcare, education, accommodation…. Salary is not only finance resource to cover cost of living, to take care employee’s family, but also is a measure to define ability and position of one employee in company or in society. In addition, a good wage will encourage staffs and give them feeling of appreciation for their effort. Obviously, it is not hard to see why most people focus on salary payment when seeking a job.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, other factors are as important as what we earn in our job. Firstly, studying chances to grow up professional skills or training plans are considered like a long-term investment and stable development of one potential employee in one business. Secondly, personal relationships and atmosphere in workplace are extremely vital. A job with high remuneration but working environment or working condition are terrible may not be a good choice for job-seeker. Thirdly, the position employee reach or achievements they get in working progress give them feelings of job satisfaction more than the amount of money they earn.
In conclusion, while salary is main factor, which affect choice of job, from my point of view, it does not outweigh all other motivators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: WORKING_PROGRESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work in progress'?
Suggestion: work in progress
...loyee reach or achievements they get in working progress give them feelings of job satisfaction ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09558823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99297900674 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.317086398 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481710299822 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14707154533 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152420638503 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314844425127 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284450122473 0.056905535591 500% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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