When choosing a job The salary is the most important consideration What extent do you agree or disagree

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When choosing a job. The salary is the most important consideration. What extent do you agree or disagree?

While in the search of a job, every individual has a list in their psyche about the kind of work they desire. For some job seekers, salary is on the top of the list and is the deciding factor whether to grab the opportunity or not. But, be that as it may, I believe there are other factors as well which we cannot turn blind eye on. This essay will elucidate the same in the forthcoming paragraphs.

At the outset, what is usually a deciding factor while accepting a job offer is the wage, as in this day and age where inflation is surging at an unprecedented rate, earning a substantial amount of money is imperative to have a tension free life. Thus, in order to grab the jobs with high salary, job aspirants often ignore other factors. For instance, the employee where she will get paid higher, will assist him in the living a life with better amenities in lieu of the one working at a minimum wage. That’s why, whooping salary can attract anyone’s attention.

Apart from this, does other factors not matter while getting hired? Definitely, it matters. First of all, the place where the employee will be working ,as otherwise a person may waste a hefty amount of his salary while commuting. To exemplify, if one job is at 15 to 20 minutes drive, it will be more convenient and easy on the pocket; however if a worker has to travel for an hour or two daily, it would not only be the waste his time but also money. Moreover, colleagues also are the deciding factor in some jobs as it can be the reason of stress, if they doesn’t get along, thereby affecting their as well as company’s growth. Infosys, for example, owing the importance of good relations among employees, set a group meeting on the very first day to give the interviewee an idea about the mindset of coworkers.

To conclude, although the amount an employee will get can be the deciding factor by keeping in mind the inflation, location and co-workers attitude cannot be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...employee where she will get paid higher, will assist him in the living a life wit...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...place where the employee will be working ,as otherwise a person may waste a hefty ...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[3]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'don’t'
Suggestion: don’t
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57670454545 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52001127086 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4880656894 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802808414936 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289289996048 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283948910601 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479478581626 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293692304126 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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