when choosing a job,the salary is most important consideration. To what extent you are agree or disagree?
In recent time money become the most important thing for human being and when it comes to choosing a job most attention is given to wages. I strongly disagree with this, that salary is only deciding factor for selecting a job.
Firstly,the what type of job you do is also a important parameter when it comes to selecting a job. The type of job should match your qualification that you acquire over the period of type in particular field of specilisation and your ability to do best with the kind of job you are choosing.For instance ,if some is qualified in law and given job as clerk with good wages, he will never perform Up to the mark and never able to utilize his qualification.
Moreover, sense of satisfaction is more important than salary.after doing so much hard work at work place if person is not satisfied with the kind of job he is doing all the hard work goes in to veins.when people satisfied with there work they perform much better at work place despite of low wages. And you satisfied with your work you spent good quality time with your family to despite of thinking about your job. And the sense of satisfaction give you stress free life compare to those who are unsatisfied with there work even there salary is high. For example driver is more satisfied in driving a car compare to lawyer who is working as Clark for high salary.
Conclusion, however salary is one of thing when it comes to decide a job but job satisfaction ,work type also play a crucial role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55390334572 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53690168336 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2613489325 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255146641716 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129807201477 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942128628989 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180722238396 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710501166745 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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