Working from home, some think as beneficial and some people think as distract to family. Kindly provide your opinion?
In this modern era, different job facilities are available to individual's based on their convenience, in which working from home is highlighted in front for the housewives. While some people believe this as hindrances for family it is outweighed with several advantageous factor and I agree with those factors.
To start with, time reliability and flexibility are taken as first point for which most of the housewives are opting the work from home. Additionally, there will be financial support for family members in fulfilling their commitments or making household expenses. For instance, it is considered as must to have two income for the family to survive in this economy as the cost of all regular needs and groceries are high.
Despite of the benefits, there might be problems of fake companies that utilize the services to provide work with initial deposits, which would be cheated at later stage. Moreover, at some uncertain time of relatives visits to home may be distracting to complete the work and also feel awkward in front of relatives.
In my point of view, eventhough there are certain disadvantages it is must for the housewives to have certain second income to take care of the family and to make herself feel secured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...nses. For instance, it is considered as must to have two income for the family to survi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1067961165 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80081522678 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.2272592951 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133641801367 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601450943858 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544267509704 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076816998039 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056128795644 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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