While some people think that art is an important subject for children to study, others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Art is a subject that has been taught at school for generations. Whilst, many people are for arts to be taught at schools, others are totally against this idea. In this essay, I will be discussing both views and give arguments for why I think artistic subjects are essential for children.
It is often thought that studying art at school is a waste of time and resources because it is believed that children will not gain many skills from these subjects that can be helpful to them in the future. Learning art is not going to prepare them for their professional life. Furthermore, even if they wanted to pursue an artistic carrier, they are going to face many difficulties because they are going to struggle to make a living as artists.
Nevertheless, teaching art to the younger generation will help in building their character and their communication skills. For example, art classes like dancing and theater encourage kids to work in groups and express themselves through their art and this will have an impact on their lives in the future and in becoming a functional individual in society. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is important to have creative and artistic subjects at school to ensure that we prepare children properly for the future.
In conclusion, although arts do not have a direct impact on children’s lives, I believe that they should still have art classes because of how much it affects their communication skills and build their characters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93172690763 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73199837111 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1147091387 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252773334106 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10685162085 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722536721863 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148307995025 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847535497718 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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