You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Say why he she would not enjoy going to college.
Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Aden,
I have recently received your letter and I was thrilled to hear about your news. I think congratulation is in order on your graduation from high school. I must tell you that I am proud of you and of your accomplishments.
So, In your letter, you have asked me whether your next step should be going to college or start looking for a job? Well, To be honest, I believe that you would not enjoy being a college student at all because it can be very boring and monotonous. In addition, college life is stressful sometimes, and knowing what type of person you are and how you hate stressful situations, I think it is better if you chose to start working right away.
Besides, starting a job Is much better for you mainly because you simply do not need to waste your time and money on learning things you may not ever need. I remember that you are passionate about sports and you have a black belt in martial art. So you can start doing the things you love immediately without the need for further education.
I hope you consider my advice and I will wait for your next letter to hear about what have you decided on doing.
Your friend,
Lily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, may, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40186915888 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43265480816 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1069324211 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332421676818 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13943307613 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671438976542 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204187853515 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402489359436 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.