You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter• Say what job you have applied for.• explain why you want th

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. in your letter
• Say what job you have applied for.
• explain why you want this job.
• Suggest what information the teacher should include.

Dear Madam,

I am applying for a job and would need a reference letter from a school teacher. Since, you know me for a very long time I would like you to write the letter for me.

Let me explain in detail. Firstly, I have recently been offered a role of Accounts professor by Singapore University and I would like to take it up. Moreover, I have just completed my teaching course and this seems like a good start to my career. Due to the summer holidays, there were no job vacancies for almost two months, as a result I was unemployed. Secondly, my savings are diminishing and I urgently need to fill up the position or else they might move on to another candidate.

Lastly, here are some information that need to be included in the letter. My participation in school activities like - debates, school events, etc. Also, since I was the captain of the basketball team, it would be nice to add that too. Finally, you can mention about my personality in school and how long we know each other.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
Mary Adams

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, you know, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61458333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61326933595 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9244670689 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1538461538 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33175434826 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101879079381 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110054436999 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213406949326 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157701670196 0.0580467560999 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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