Why does society pays less attention to women’s sports as compared to men’s sports?
Male sports v/s female sports have been a very controversial topic for a long time. It is really very shameful that female sports in our society never have been encouraged as much as male sports. In this essay will discuss, despite of getting so many evolving talents. Female sports do not get the same coverage as male sports.
Firstly, it is very true that society is not ready to welcome female sports. Encouraging view about women sports still have long way to go until our society stops discriminating male and female. Some people still think that women have to take care of family only. We have seen very few female athletes struggling to make their career in sports. As for example the Olympic boxing champion Mary kom, had to fight against her society , and overcome evry hurdles came in her path to make a bright career in boxing.
Secondly, motivation is always important to make something unique in any field. But the government, media always like to keep their focus on male sports as people wait eagerly for male sports more than female sports. Even female athlete does not get proper remuneration that they deserve. This is another vital reason that pulling them back from the sports.
Lastly, our society needs to give more coverage to female sports as compare to male sports. Providing proper coverage will inspire female in sports that will creat people awareness in female sports. If we focus more towards that we might get more female faces in international level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ry kom, had to fight against her society , and overcome evry hurdles came in her p...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reat people awareness in female sports. If we focus more towards that we might get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, still, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88188976378 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30904811363 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7352860766 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159224736981 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620513711087 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571582667435 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109149320292 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201916865343 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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