The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
The Internet is a revolutionary technology and it has changed the way people work, interact with each other and interchange information, but not without consequences and the negative aspects are mostly related to the overuse and over reliance on this technology. In this essay main problems of the Internet technology, in particular, widespread use of it, with possible solutions have been discussed.
First of all, widespread use of the Internet is related to new and innovative devices like smartphones and computers and we replace those devices more frequently than ever. Thus we are creating a throwaway society and contributing to the production of more dangerous waste than our previous generations. Furthermore, social media, online games, entertaining videos, etc. which are available online are contributing to the online addiction among many teenagers. Laziness, for instance, is one of the most severe consequences of overreliance on the Internet and that obstructs people from participating in social activities. In addition, people are becoming less active, both socially and physically, and that is mainly because they are using the Internet all the time. As a result, our health condition is deteriorating and our social life is in jeopardy. Finally, our privacy is hanging in a vulnerable position and our security is in a risky state due to our dependency on the Internet.
After investigating causes of the problems thoroughly, it will be easier to offer solutions to the matter. Because of the teenagers and youth are more dependent on the web than the older generation, it is an advantage to provide activities for those with the restriction of cell phones, for sure. We should buy a new electronic device only when this is absolutely necessary. Moreover, the use of the Internet in schools and workplaces should be monitored. Young generation should be encouraged to get involved in social and outdoor activities. Finally, we should make our Internet access more secure and follow the standard security protocol so that hackers and intruders cannot access and gain our personal information like password or credit card number.
In conclusion, despite the fact that our society is becoming more dependent on the Internet and that can bring some negative effects for us, we have the solutions to mitigate these problems and enjoy the good side of this technology offers us.
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| 2019-03-09 | Saira Faiz | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-09 | Saira Faiz | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hose devices more frequently than ever. Thus we are creating a throwaway society and...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...new electronic device only when this is absolutely necessary. Moreover, the use of the Internet in s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on like password or credit card number. In conclusion, despite the fact that our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29319371728 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99775598392 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541884816754 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0345321375 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.941176471 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190313310695 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628652056282 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705103317215 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124695176128 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442938996355 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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