Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Whether death punishment is required or not in a civilized society is a difficult question to answer. In spite of abolishment of death penalty by most of the western countries, some countries including Saudi Arabia, Malaysia and Singapore still have capital punishment. Although, the countries having capital punishment show reduced crime rate, it does not imply that they do not have any crimes at all. In my opinion, Capital punishment is essential for major crimes like women and children sexual exploitation and drug trafficking.
Human rights advocates argue that a society does not have the rights to remove one’s life. Besides, there is always a possibility of convicting someone due to circumstantial evidence. Most civil societies prescribe to the notion that “We can allow the escape of 1000 criminals but should not allow the conviction of 1 innocent person “.
Hammurabi’s code of justice is popular since he ruled Egypt around 3000 years before. It advocates capital punishment for serious crimes. It should be noted that capital punishment is awarded for serious crimes like murder, violence against children and drug trafficking in some of the countries. However, it should be noted that a fair and honest legal system with impartial implementation of the rules of law is a necessity for the capital punishment system to work in a transparent manner.
In conclusion, in a world filled with increasing rates of crimes against children, women and other serious crimes, capital punishment may provide a noteworthy tool for counteracting the challenging crimes. In my opinion, Proper diligence should be followed ,while awarding the capital punishment to the criminals.
- Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98296366862 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7783551392 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254414955932 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938323505329 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685869120451 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148557111128 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900574355622 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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