Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
there is no doubt this days most of countries are facing a high record of crimes and they should control it with more punishment to avoid or at least reduced. However the question you are agree about the procedure or no? it became considerally and effect in our life detrimentally.
So today in my essay I will examine the phenomenon from both point view. But still I believe it’s required and we can’t neglect.
on one side some of the people argue that the main reason of the law broke was the poor which consider as a source and government should be fight and provide a luxury life for community better than to increase the rolls. Moreover when they succeed automatically the crime number will reduce gradually.
On other hand, those who insisted to apply the judgment actually they have tend that it necessary because it become from human attitude and there is no way you will find an unnecessary bad behavior from few of society members then should delegate and stopping it immediately and apply maximum level of punish without mercy.
as we have seen its difficult to answer the questions on balance I tend to believe it one of most priority to apply the punishment what ever who did a mistake
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...unishment to avoid or at least reduced. However the question you are agree about the pr...
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...ou are agree about the procedure or no? it became considerally and effect in our l...
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...y and effect in our life detrimentally. So today in my essay I will examine the ...
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... required and we can't neglect. on one side some of the people argue that...
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...glect. on one side some of the people argue that the main reason of the law br...
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...er as a source and government should be fight and provide a luxury life for community...
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...nity better than to increase the rolls. Moreover when they succeed automatically the cri...
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...the crime number will reduce gradually. On other hand, those who insisted to app...
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...o apply the judgment actually they have tend that it necessary because it become fro...
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... have tend that it necessary because it become from human attitude and there is no way...
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...imum level of punish without mercy. as we have seen its difficult to answer th...
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...imum level of punish without mercy. as we have seen its difficult to answer th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, at least, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53581109232 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1270952907 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115397992874 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430822855171 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379268045884 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569759347724 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502902263752 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.