Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
Nowadays, governments are paying more attention to transportation system in cities instead of rural areas and they are also devoting more budget for this purpose. In this essay, I am writing to discuss reasons and give suitable solutions.
Undoubtedly, living in cities brings many different facilities for citizens. Most of people come to urban areas to use these various convenience such as education’s high quality, occupation’s opportunities, more comfortable circumstances for their life, medical facilities. they also immigrate to cities, to achieve their aims and live rather convenient. So, in regard to these reasons, population in cities have grown rapidly. therefore, devote more funds to transport system in cities will be undeniable to improve infrastructure and creating better condition for supporting these amount of population and also their commuting. All these factors require an expanding budget.
On the other hand, by preparing better situation, as it was mentioned, by living in rural areas that no one have not any compulsory to leave their provenance, population in these places can be gradually increased. Moreover, local governments by paying more attention to tourism industry in rural areas with its spectacular views, it can be attracted more tourists. therefore, by all these solutions, it can be hoped that governments are forced to devote more funds to transport system in rural areas to respond all population’s needs.
All in all, facilities and especially population in cities illustrate that allocating more budget to cities in order to rural areas for transportation system is generally correct and rational. But there are some measures that can help to reduce this difference, just by a suitable management and a perfect plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, governments are paying more at...
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Suggestion: many
.... Undoubtedly, living in cities brings many different facilities for citizens. Most of people...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...many different facilities for citizens. Most of people come to urban areas to use these variou...
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Suggestion: They
...ces for their life, medical facilities. they also immigrate to cities, to achieve th...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...opulation in cities have grown rapidly. therefore, devote more funds to transport system ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ews, it can be attracted more tourists. therefore, by all these solutions, it can be hope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, as for, as to, such as, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54945054945 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20496702891 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8341845227 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0160150007328 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00781452651911 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0121494214018 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00888856020378 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0089080983151 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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