The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. what are the dangers of this situation? what should we do
It is true that in recent years, the demand for natural resources has reached ever-increased rate. This has resulted in several consequences, some measures should be implemented to tackle this problem.
This tendency contains serious impact on both individual life and environment. Firstly, the mining processing will generate tons of waste which caused air pollution and water contamination. Some villages, in China, have recorded a growth rate of patients who got lung cancer and other respiratory diseases due to living in the vicinity of mining areas. Secondly, the carbon dioxide emissions, producing when burning fossil fuels, are increasing rapidly and one of the most reasons for global warming effects. Due to the rising temperature, the melting glacier in the North of Earth has been happening faster than ever. In 2016, the total yield of glacier less than 20% compared to 1990.
In order to reduce the negative effects of this situation, some measures should be adopted. In personal perspective, citizens must awareness the importance of saving energy in lieu of wasting it like they used to do before. They can start by numerous simple activities such as turn off the lights and unplug electronic devices when they are not in use, or reduce the energy consumption in peak times. In government perspective, new policies which encourage companies in using renewable energy should be published by the authorities. For example, the government can reduce tax for manufacturers investing in using green energy.
In conclusion, the dangers of overconsumed natural resources are predictable, to mitigate the harmful impacts on environment and communities, some actions need to be adopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4022556391 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9232484175 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654135338346 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2828123772 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178688913352 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579477749776 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623091490857 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125943177728 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808293291167 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.