The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
Nowadays, we are facing the fact that the consumption of natural resources is reaching higher rate than ever. This essay will discuss about some serious consequences and put forward solutions to that issue.
The biggest problem might be the depletion of natural resources. According to data compiled by report , global natural resources depleting by 45% a year which is very alarming. Along with that, climate change, global warming, ozone layer depletion may stem from overusing natural resources ineffectively and improperly. All these environmental degradations are believed to contribute to the destruction of the earth. What is more, if we continue using without saving, our next generations will not have crystal clear water to drink, fresh air to breathe, etc. In short, the consequences are unnumerous and effect not only our daily life but our children have to suffer also.
Knowing what we are facing urges us to take action. First we need to raise individual responsibility by taking part in green campain , saving energy, etc. Small action like turn off the light when it is not necessary contributes a lot to our saving energy campain . In terms of goverment , they should release more strict law on company breaking the law. At the same time, it is better if government pour more money into scientific researchs , especially research finding renewable resources.
To sum up, using too much energy will causes natural resource depletion, environmental degradation and we need to take (không nhìn ra từ này) action to save our Earth.
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also, but, first, if, may, so, in short, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24497991968 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80051632486 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694779116466 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3819226595 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187809606828 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576439771999 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545417501646 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109032209647 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034065800163 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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