Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer or choice.
People want a place to relax from a long hectic work for whole day. It’s a point to ponder that what kind of accommodation they are going to leave all their tensions of workplace. If someone asks me to choose, which type of living space I would rather have, is it an apartment in tower block or a standalone house than I acknowledged for a traditional home. What is the justification of my answer? I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, your privacy will be compromised if you are living in a flat building. What if you want to swim solely and there are so many people around you? Isn't it making you uncomfortable? Furthermore, you have no right to do, favourite leisure time activity the gardening and to grow eye pleasing flowers and plants. In addition, gym having a limited hours and workout routine is not matching with your block gym. For example, you are doing dumbbells in morning around 6.45 and the gym open at 7.00am; you don’t have much time because you have to leave for your office at 7.30am. It will be tiring and hustling if you match up with gym timing. Secondly, you are free to park in your own garage if you are living separately; no one says it is my place, doesn’t park your car here. Moreover, there is no issue in planning late night parties and playing loud music while some shared buildings are not allowed in specific timings. To add more, you can have your pets in your own vicinity and they are free to roam around the house.
However, modern quarters require less cleaning and cumbersome furniture but for me, above circumstances can make my life miserable.
To sum up, in your own house you have much more freedom to do whatever you want besides it increases household chores and expenses as well but overtakes the conditions that apply in home units.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...their tensions of workplace. If someone ask me to choose, which type of living spac...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: STAND_ALONE_NN[1]
Message: This world is usually written together in this context: 'standalone'.
Suggestion: standalone
... is it an apartment in tower block or a stand alone house than I acknowledged for a traditi...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: STAND_ALONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'standalone'?
Suggestion: standalone
... is it an apartment in tower block or a stand alone house than I acknowledged for a traditi...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...nd there are so many people around you? Isnt it making you uncomfortable? Furthermor...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...atching with your block gym. For example , you are doing dumbbells in morning arou...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overtakes'?
Suggestion: overtakes
...hold chores and expenses as well but it overtake the conditions that apply in home units...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52710843373 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48538006168 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6563402484 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240451186119 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722172904423 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045784266743 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137839969404 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209342438218 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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