Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Community services is one the important virtues that must be inculcated in the students during their formative years of education. Whether these activities should be paid or unpaid? This conundrum is deliberated in the essay below.
Volunteering, is by very nature, is expected to be provided for free. Many schools plan project work involving ocean cleaning activities to clear up the plastic trash from the beaches. This service imbibes in the student a feeling of being a responsible citizen and connects with their communities.There is another example, pupils in Japan after school hours clean their campus and toilets. this may seem pretty strange for the rest of the world but Japanese believe that their kids should to learn human values like empathy and respect from a very young age.
On the contrary, there are projects, which involve travelling to overseas countries, promoted by United Nations.Many students want to engage in humanitarian causes are unable to do due to expensive of the financial costs associated to the assignment. For example, if a project is presented to travel to Vietnam to teach English to a rural community and help develop their society, many students drop out because they simply cannot self-fund those expenses.To motivate and to encourage more participation from young people, these not-for-profit organizations pay for stipend, insurance, meal and accommodation for the helpers.Sometimes, the social work is based in war-torn countries or remote location in Africa, where with the help of young enthusiasts, the NGO try to develop the local communities and restore peace. With an international participation, organization like NATO and un are able to garner support from developed nations to resolve problems in these places.
Based on the aforementioned discussion, social work is undoubtedly an important contribution from the well-provided to the underprivileged people. However, whether these jobs should cover basic costs of the volunteer depends on the task, location and expenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43848580442 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00014760788 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3727186066 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159196865468 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492111615917 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404594533815 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092318236736 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034996680926 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.