Writing Task 2 an essay Many people believe sport lessons are important in school timetable Both boys and girls should take part in sports Do you agree or disagree with the statement Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experi

It is undeniable that sports are imperative for body's growth for both boys and girls.Sports should be include in school time table. Majority of masses think sport lessons are important in teaching institution time frame.I fully agree with given statement.This essay intends major benefits of sports for both gender. There are many advantages of sports lessons in school timetable.Firstly,this trend assist to attain good heath.For example,if school organised some spots like as circkt, football and others this help to the students to know about game techniques and provide recreation.Continously studying make the pupils monotonous.Through sports activity children become far away from monotory and will able to pay concentration again towards study.
Additional with, physical activites sopport a healthy lifestyle for both girls and boys.In this present time period,no one have enough time for exercise.Therefore, teaching institute should involve a particular lecture for sports activity,so that pupils can do some physical exercise regularly. Inspite of merits there are few drawbacks ,if students spent all day in playing games then they cannot do better in exam .Ergo,others subjects such as science, mathematics, English etctera are essential for every learner. In final analysis,considered above all merits I conculde that sports period is necessary in every teaching institute with other all study materials.Educator should adjust game activity in school time table.

Votes
Average: 5.9 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81105990783 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46840861972 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6866359447 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8417088976 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.166666667 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177260125813 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950305041484 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509436779901 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143098173717 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596061980379 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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